Thanks for the crit, britbrakdown. I agree with you on all points, I like the fact that the attention focuses back on the spider queen, that for many reasons, was the intention so I'm glad that you noticed that your critique has help me to shape more of the overall vision for this piece. thanks a bunch!

You're welcome! I'm relieved you found it to be constructive.

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I noticed you gave me a 3 for impact, what would help to increase that rating?

I tried to rate it according to the DA definitions of each category. "impact – Does the artwork resonate with you or evoke strong emotions? Does it make you think? Does it blow your mind?" The level of destruction is one thing, but I've already mentioned that. For the "evoke strong emotions" part, perhaps you could try to show the impact on the town folk? Something like a mom running away terrified, clutching her baby in her arms. I think that adding a human emotion to the scene would inspire a stronger reaction from your viewers. It doesn't have to be "in your face" cause that would take away from the focus on the queen, but having it somewhere in the scene could add life and feeling to the piece.

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Ah good point.

Thanks again for the crit. This new feature is awesome. Good job DA!

No kidding! In an age of useless features, DA has really done well with this one.

Keep up the awesome work.

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